Like many others, he reborn into a normal family in the Kapilavastu kingdom, ruled under the control of King Suddhodana. In a day of his reincarnation, the hermit Asita came to the king and report that the sky appeared the new stars, which appeared super shine. Asita said that there will be a supreme lord who his reborn will soon make this country better.
The King send his guards to find the newborn. What a strange coincidence that a whole kingdom just appear only one pregnant woman.
Buddha walked on a lotus. Picture from Wiki
Month passed, she gave birth to a boy, but unluckily, she died after that. The King soon adopted him and officially named him Prince Siddhartha. At the same day, all lotus flowers in the kingdom are flourishing, spread a soft aroma. Prince Siddhartha appeared healthy, and beautiful. He also appeared with a light pale pink nimbus, just like the color of the lotus. Anywhere he came, lotus was born, people was happy. The whole kingdom felt highly enthusiastic. The king decided to open the three days party to celebrate of his newborn. The King also brought the nature mother of Prince to the national Buddhist temple to worship.
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Author's Note: Based on the Life of Buddha: The Birth of Siddhartha by Andre Ferdinand Herold, I changed the context a bit. The original version doesn't mention about the seven feelings and six root afflictions. Because of the limited in English, I can't take into account many things about Buddhism that I know. However, I believe that a Buddha should born in a normal way to understand a normal life.
In the story of Andre Ferdinand Herold, Maya, a Queen, dreamed about the elephant that entered to her womb. She then later pregnant, then born to Prince Siddhartha under the precious tree. She died about seven days later.
I add the lotus to the story because most of the Buddha i know (via pictures and movies), all sits and meditates in Buddha's throne made from lotus.
The hermit Asita heard about the birth of Siddhartha. He came to the king to see the Prince. He told that the Prince soon became a supreme Lord Buddha.
Hi Kha! I enjoyed your story. I read the authors note first because I was not familiar with The Life of Buddha story beforehand. Truthfully, I am not very informed about Buddha or Buddism at all, so reading your story about it was something new and interesting. I like how you added little details throughout your story like the lotus. I also liked your last/ending sentence of your story. It made me laugh and seemed to be somewhat humorous. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteWhen reading the story I noticed that you used the symbol of lotus flowers a lot in the story and I liked how you explained them in the author’s note! I like that you added them, not because they were in the original story but because you noticed a trend in the pictures that had Buddha in them. I also liked how in the first paragraph of this story you explained why Buddha was being born as a human.
Hello Kha, I thought your story was really great! I actually don’t have much knowledge of Bhuddism so it was nice reading this and learning some things. I thought your story was written really well throughout the story. I liked how you added what you’ve seen in other stories and movies to your story give it was you believe it should be like. Overall I thought it was a great read, keep it up!
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